Tick Tock the clock in the witch's hand!
Once upon a time it was a dark howling night, all in the castle were sleeping but the guards but the guards didn’t see a crow coming in through the window! And that little tiny window led into a very secret place. It was the treasure room, even the most hardest treasure to even find was there! But the palace had the most valuable thing of all in there and that was, a clock, but not just any clock! This clock could take you straight through time! The crow was sent by an evil witch who was waiting on the beach for the clock, the witch wanted to use the clock for stealing, testing and even kidnapping people to test potions with! The clock was the most powerful item ever! But then the crow smashed through the glass and took the clock, struggling to carry it but the crow managed to get out of the castle with it....
Finally after hours of flying the crow found a place to rest, but when the crow put the clock down, the crow saw a golden key then the crow remembered what the witch said (when you find the clock you must find a golden key, the golden key allows the clock to take you through time) so then the crow set off again heading to the beach, still carrying the clock & the key. After a few hours of flying the crow became very tired, the crow wanted to find another place to rest but there was no cave or anything that the crow could rest at so the crow went on a thick branch and putted the clock & the key against the tree then the crow went to sleep right next to the clock and the key…
After another day the witch on the beach was still waiting after 2 long days, the witch soon became tired of waiting and wanted the clock now! The witch wondered how to get to the crow which had the clock but then after a while of thinking the witch had an idea! The witch: why don’t I send more crows to help the other crow and give the clock to me! then the clock will be all mine HAHAHAHAH! So then the witch sent 5 more crows to help the other crow to give the clock to her. And the end! Kid 1: Ohh Mum, can we please have another story! Pleaseee kid 2: yeah mum another story! Mum: no kids time for bed but I will take any questions. Kid 1 and 2: we have a question! Mum: go on. Kid 1 is the story perhaps… kid 2: real?? Mum: no kids it’s just a story now off to bed! Kid 1 and 2: night mum! Mum: night kids. (mum walks out and turns lights off) the witch: oh well what do we have here someone who thinks i’m.. FAKE? Oh yes my dear crow it’s so hurtful well why don’t we show them who’s really fake? hehe.
Ka pai Zara! What a great adventure story, full of twists and turns. I really liked how you linked each picture and made the crows the main characters. Your ending was also a surprise, changing it from an adventure story into a fairy tale told by a mum at bedtime. Next time you use talking in your writing, start each new piece of speech on a new line. I am looking forward to reading your next story. Blog you later!
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