Kia ora Zara. Thanks for sharing your work. It is tricky isn't it trying to get a full story into only 100 words. You have to really decide what are the most important parts of the story and leave out everything else. We will keep working on it in class.
hi miss o'shea thanks for your comment and yes it is really tricky doing only 100 words so in that case you might want a part 2 have you done a hundred word story before? if so was it hard? bye blog ya later!!!
Kia Ora Zara it's Lucy here, I really like your piece of writing that you have posted. Very descriptive and very detailed. I remember doing this writing in my class. Thank you for sharing your lovely work with us. Did you like writing about Coin Operated? Blog you later! Lucy
Kia ora Zara. Thanks for sharing your work. It is tricky isn't it trying to get a full story into only 100 words. You have to really decide what are the most important parts of the story and leave out everything else. We will keep working on it in class.
ReplyDeletehi miss o'shea thanks for your comment and yes it is really tricky doing only 100 words so in that case you might want a part 2
ReplyDeletehave you done a hundred word story before? if so was it hard?
bye blog ya later!!!
Kia Ora Zara it's Lucy here, I really like your piece of writing that you have posted. Very descriptive and very detailed. I remember doing this writing in my class. Thank you for sharing your lovely work with us.
ReplyDeleteDid you like writing about Coin Operated?
Blog you later!
Lucy