Wednesday, 18 August 2021

the present (but I changed it a little)













hey guys here is the story " the present" but i changed it a little now there will be a part two!
bye blog ya later!!!



 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Zara
    It is a challenge when you have a limited word count so well done for giving it a go and showing Manawanuitanga.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Kia Ora Zara
    Isn't it funny how 100 seems quite a big number until it is how many words you're allowed to write! I agree with Mrs Haines it would be a challenge to write a complete story i.e. a beginning, middle and end in just 100 words! I might give it a go...

    ReplyDelete
  3. hi mrs haines and sheryl fletcher! I just changed it a little becuase I thought of it "wait why don't I redo the story but cut part of it off" that is when I thought there could be a dunn dun dun dun! A PART 2!
    so yea there will be a part 2
    bye blog ya later!!!

    ReplyDelete